Wednesday, 3 June 2015

Year 13, Unit 43, Task 3




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  1. Abbies work is fit for purpose because it shows how to make the perfect cup off coffee which was her main goal in the first place. The media that she has used in this piece of work are appropriate and relevant to what she was achieving. everything works when it comes to her media piece as all of the videos work and the links that she has placed. It is professional as it is set to a high standard with out any technical errors.
    1. There should be more colour
    2. More wording
    3. The font should be a bigger
    4. The pictures should be edited to fit
    5. Check spelling and grammar

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    Give at least 5 amendments you think the designer should make.

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